A couple of my students asked to analyze one of my poems for class. I gave them a few (coming soon as a SUBPRESS book!)
Response to one of my student's essays:
I have to say I appreciate your astute ability to talk about this
narrator as separate from myself, as if the narrator is a character, or
maybe even "everyman". You helped me narrow in on what this poem is
about in a fresh way and I appreciate that too. There is a kind of turn
around in this poem, what you call a "redirection", and the clue of the
surfboard is there. Some kind of weird conflation of light and water
And maybe a metaphor with poetry. Like the surf is life and the paper is the surf board.
The Steven King Crouch End thing intrigues, but you have to explain. I haven't read it so not sure what you are referencing.
The "S" idea you need to explicate. (maybe the wave itself? S is a wave.)
The "I" idea you get nicely.
The sadness is interesting. You point to the stray cat as a clue and I like that. The word stray does imply "from something".
You mention the poem's loneliness, and though it is there, I think
there is something in the "emptiness" that is not lonely, which leads to
the wave, to the poem.